This needs a lot more.An intro outlining what this presentation will address. Each section needs a range of specific examples from films, each one discussed.Actors - that's body language, expressions, gestures, etc. And why of course - like every section. Think of connotations throughout.Themes not even started. Every section is too brief. Camera and editing barely starts. No videos? What's going on??
Much betterThemes and sounds are still too vague - where are the examples?Cam and editing still a little on the thin side and perhaps some of the examples could be more genre specific. It ends too abruptly and needs a conclusion, with a summary of key pointsB-
This needs a lot more.
ReplyDeleteAn intro outlining what this presentation will address.
Each section needs a range of specific examples from films, each one discussed.
Actors - that's body language, expressions, gestures, etc. And why of course - like every section. Think of connotations throughout.
Themes not even started. Every section is too brief. Camera and editing barely starts. No videos? What's going on??
Much better
ReplyDeleteThemes and sounds are still too vague - where are the examples?
Cam and editing still a little on the thin side and perhaps some of the examples could be more genre specific.
It ends too abruptly and needs a conclusion, with a summary of key points
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